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IRRITATING EVENING CONUNDRUM IN REPOSE

i see these other yayhoos submitting their drivel. i too have a soul that is on fire. i too have rhythm and beauty. and yes i am bleeding like a stuck pig to bare my soul to my brink brothers.
here is my song-poem...
 
a trailer in the park
trees surrounded by bark
i struggle alone here in the dark
having shat my undies once more

 

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davo
Sunday, 01 June 2008
touching, in a very special way...
ZOGTONE
Sunday, 01 June 2008
thanks davo! it's my first attempt. i see that other dude doing his little four line meanderings and i said to myself- hey man...you can do that!

ive splayed myself out here for all brinkdom to see. it was downright therapeutic...cleansing...excretory...

who knows what lie ahead...maybe a brink film of interpretive fight dancing. out in the desert. with evil clowns.
Yellowmonkey
Sunday, 01 June 2008
you speak to my soul... bleed, excrete, splay ... bring in the clowns!
ZOGTONE
Sunday, 01 June 2008
can i buy a bowel alex?
Yellowmonkey
Monday, 02 June 2008
you buy bowels from PAT, and you tell Alex your lame nerd stories...
GimbleTreadmill
Monday, 02 June 2008
This is pure Larkin, may I congratulate you Mr Zogtone
ZOGTONE
Monday, 02 June 2008
thanks a bunch gimb! i love patty larkin. it hink i missed my calling, dont you?
GimbleTreadmill
Monday, 02 June 2008
It's an honour but I meant Philip, not Patty although Phil did occasionally played a bit of witty folk rock in the sixties.



I would appreciate more honest verse in the poetic section. Bukowski was proud of his turds. Perhaps thats the skid mark of a good poet, I am already a fan of yours and hope to see more of your work. best rgd's GT
GimbleTreadmill
Monday, 02 June 2008
I apilogose 4 my spilling but I'm pissed
ZOGTONE
Monday, 02 June 2008
wasnt sure who it wuz, but i figured you werent a larkin follower so.....

the skid mark of a good poet. beautiful stuff.
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